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Message  Reiji le Ven 18 Avr - 19:29

Voici la traduction en anglais du premier Chapitre par SilverSea de MangaHelpers.

"LOOK UP, AIM HIGH" (Jap: Miagetegoran)

SEIRYO High School TENNIS TEAM STORY
By Michiteru Kusaba

Rez. for MangaS

005
THE GRAND SLAM!!
Among all the tennis championships in the world……

The Australian Open, the French Open and Wimbledon---It is the fourth and final event of the US Open……

SFX: murmur, murmur

This Japanese teenager…..

006
Never before has the Grand Slam been won by a Japanese athlete.

007
At this moment, there is a young man who will create a miracle, finally fulfilling this awesome achievement……

008 + 009
Chapter 1
The Opening Prelude to the Legend

010
However, this is something far, far into the future……

TN: Signboard says Yuzawa Dojo.

011
SFX: ring ring ring ring

012
Grandpa:
The fishcake is the most outstanding food of all
-It’s got the best and most balanced nutrition!
-High Protein, low calorie, low fat…
-Full of vitamins and minerals!!

Grandpa: What’s more, it’s got the indispensable element needed for the sudden strike technique in Kendo… flexibility
- In other words the “Essence of Shark Cartilage”!

Grandma: Thanks, but we’ve heard more than enough, Grandpa.

Grandpa: By the way, is Ryou-kun ( temporary spelling L-kun) still sleeping?
-Today is the first day of High School……

013
L-kun: Ohayo
-I’ve been standing here all along

Grandpa: You, what’s with that hair of yours!!?
-It was still black only yesterday!?
-You actually dyed it like a gaijin!?

Grandma: This child is too undisciplined

Grandpa: Don’t tell me you still don’t possess the self-awareness required of a successor of my Dojo!?

014
Grandpa: Lend me your hair dye, wifey!!

L-kun: WAHH! What are you doing!?
-It took me two whole hours to dye it last night!?

Grandpa: You brat!! Don’t run away!!

-You’ve forgotten your Kendo equipment!!
-Did you bring my recommendation letter!?

Grandma: L-kun, how about your breakfast!?
L-kun: Don’t worry!! I ate some fishcake!!
-I’m leaving for school now!

Grandpa: ----Tch, that boy…

Grandma: That boy…

015
Grandpa: On this important day, I can’t believe he actually left without greeting his mom and dad…

L-kun: Wow, it’s the first day of school and the weather is excellent!!
-I’m lucky as usual…!!

Old woman: Hey wait, Garbage-truck!
-Why is it earlier than usual…

016
L-kun: Granny, let me have the garbage

L-kun: I’ll chase after it!
Old woman: Oh, thank you so much…

Girl: Morning, Ryou-kun…
-You really did dye your hair…..

L-kun: I caught up.

L-kun: First thing in the morning, and I get to exercise…
-I’m quite lucky today……

Girl:Ryou-kun is such a kind boy…
Old woman: Nowadays, its rare for children to be so kind-hearted.
-Are you called Ryou-kun?

L-kun: Yup, remember my name, it will bring you good luck…

017

Girl: We’ll be in the same school
-Will you be joining the Kendo Society again?
L-kun: Yeah…
-Grandpa and the principal are old pals…

L-kun: I got in on a sports scholarship for Kendo.
Text: Recommendation Letter

Girl: I thought so too! With a brain like yours, you couldn’t have made the grade for that school.

L-kun: Heh, yeah
-Because I am a lucky boy
Girl: What?

Girl: Er, at least you could have said “no” to my jab
L-kun: Right!

L-kun: Let me REALLY test my luck!!
-What will happen if I destroy this recommendation letter!?
Girl: Wait! Ryou-kun! What are you doing!?

018
L-kun: Don’t worry! I’m lucky like that!
Girl: Surviving in this world isn’t so simple, you know……

-Seiryo Private High School
- Founded in the 39th Year of the Showa Era, the school places equal emphasis on both mental and physical excellence.
-Through Tennis, Soccer, Track and Field, Kendo, Volleyball, Judo, Baseball these seven societies, the school enhances her reputation,
-And tirelessly promotes Athletics---

TN: 39th Year of the Showa Era =1965

019
Among them, the Tennis Society enjoys the highest prestige nationwide.
- You look fit!
- Play any sports?

020
Soccer boy: No!?
-Then come on and join our soccer society!!
L-kun: WAHH---Everyone is so engrossed!

Girl:……Where are you directing your conversation?

L-kun: Tennis…

L-kun: I don’t know why, but it attracts me
Girl: What?
L-kun: No, I don’t mean it in a perverted way…
Girl: Then why…?

021
Girl classmate: What a long road ahead
-And its only the first day

L-kun: ……Hey, you dropped something
Fujitama: Ah?

Text heading: Tennis Society
2nd Line: Application Form
3rd Line: Name: Shimizu Fujimaru ( Temp spelling Fujitama)

022
Fujitama: That was close!
- It would be terrible if I lost that!!
L-kun: Shimizu Fujimaru…

-Do you intend to join the Tennis Society?
Thought bubble: Fujimaru…
-Thank you

Fujitama: Definitely!

L-kun:……
-Japan’s number one mountain…

-Hey!

023
Fujitama: Ah! You guys are from “Omorita Public High”

Fujitama: Kurosawa-kun and Oshima-kun

Bullies: So we’re in the same school again
-and you still dream about playing tennis?

Bullies: But since you can’t win a tournament, why don’t you just give up?
- Fujimaru-kun

Fujitama: Iyaa…

Fujitama: That’s why I came to this school

Fujitama: So that my game can improve.

024
Bullies: Ow, that hurt!
L-kun: Ah, excuse me

Bullies: Right…Fujimaru

Bullies: The senpai from the Tennis Society came by just now…
-He said the meeting place has changed

Fujitama: Really!?

Bullies:He was walking all around the first years,
-Told us to spread the word
Fujitama: No really,
-Is that true?

Fujitama: Thank you! I didn’t know about that.
-I would have been late!!
-I heard that the Tennis Society has pretty strict rules

025
Bullies: Its all over for him if he is late…
-Can he really be so easy to trick?

Bullies: We better hurry too, we don’t want to be late, do we?
-Heh

L-kun: This sure stinks…

027
Juniors: Don’t push
-Hurry up

L-kun: That guy is really absent…

Seniors: Application closes in 30 seconds!!
- Those who have not filled in your class and name, do it now!!

Dreadlocks: Hey! Here ya go! Faster!

L-kun: His name…What’s that…?
-Japan’s number one mountain……?

L-kun: Forget it…
-I’ll write down my own name,
-And let him have my place later……

028
Seniors: RIGHT----Application Closed!!

Seniors: Now, let’s explain the rules!!

Seniors: I think you all know about our nationally acclaimed Tennis Society. It’s the most popular society in our school.
- If we took in everyone who applied,
-Our society would cease to function!!

029
Fujitama: ……Sorry!! Please wait!!

L-kun: Ha!

Fujitama: I got the wrong meeting place, that’s why I’m late!!
SFX: Huff huff
-I am an applicant to the society!!

Seniors: A shame…
-But application is CLOSED.

Fujitama: Huh…
Seniors: Let’s return to our main topic!!

030
Seniors: Therefore, we must begin the try-out
- 100 applicants will be eliminated to 50 applicants!!

Juniors: Now!?
-But we didn’t bring our rackets!!

Seniors: Furthermore,
-Those who forgot to bring their rackets on the first day
-Are unsuitable for our society, you are disqualified!!

Dreadlocks: Wow, this is stricter than rumored! Hey!!
-Did you know about that?

031
Dreadlocks: The ginko leaf embroidered on their breast…

Dreadlocks: Represents their status within the society
-There are 5 in total……This guy has 3 so that means that he is a medium-level member.

Dreadlocks: I might as well tell you that the stripes along their arms stand for their year
-In the Tennis Society, you talk with your leaves. The more leaves you have the louder your voice is heard~

Fujitama: Excuse me…

032
Fujitama: Please!! I beg you to let me have your application…
-Pass it to me!!
-What!?

Dreadlocks: Don’t be stupid!!
-No one will pass it to you!!

Dreadlocks: Humph!
L-kun: Er, I’ll let you have mine…

Fujitama: I….I’m so unlucky…

033
Fujitama: I really want to join Seiryo Tennis Society, but I actually failed in my application…
-I stuggled so hard to study and get in here…only in exchange
-For such an ending……

Fujitama: Since I was five years old, I have been playing tennis
-and dreamt of joining Seiryo’s Tennis Team…

Fujitama: I…..
-LOVE TENNIS!!

034
Bullies: WAHH! Cry me a river!

-Ah

Bullies: You’re just an ordinary boy, Fujitama

-Ah…Fujitama!!

Bullies: To be brutally frank, isn’t a place for losers like you

Bullies: and you also ruined my little scheme

035
Bullies: You should know without me telling you, right?
-The reason why you can never make it past the first round….

Seniors: Hey! Stop chatting up and start lining up!
-Yes!

L-kun: Excuse me---
Senior: What do you want!?

L-kun: I…I’ve got something you might like to see…

036
Text: Recommendation letter

Seniors: A recommendation letter?
-For the coach?

L-kun: This gets him in.

Seniors: If its for the coach, then we have no choice……
-But we can’t spare you from the elimination round!
L-kun: That’s enough.

Seniors: Well then, let’s get cracking! We compete in doubles
-One group go stand against the wall

L-kun: Because…
- What, really?…doubles….

Fujitama: Thank…Thank you!!
L-kun: But you have to lend me a racket
Fujitama: Of course I can!! I brought two!!

037
L-kun: Luckily I did not tear it
Fujitama: Huh?
L-kun: The recommendation letter

L-kun: Another lucky break for us!!

Fujitama: Us?

038
Senior: 15 – love!

Fujitama: What---!?

Fujitama: Did you say you’ve never held a racket in your life!? How can it be!?

Fujitama: Er…I mean you even got a recommendation letter from the coach,
-doesn’t that prove your talent!?
L-kun: Ah----That’s for Kendo

039
L-kun: Actually, its because of that, so this happened, then that…

Fujitama: Its…its over now…
L-kun: What’s over?

L-kun: We still have some time before our try-out, right?
-So teach me how to play tennis now.

Fujitama: Tennis isn’t that simple…

Fujitama: I guess you also overheard what they said?
-The reason why I can never make it past the first round…

040
Fujitama: Because I puke

Fujitama: I started playing tennis since I was five, so I’ve got a certain standard
-But every time I play a match, I can’t handle the pressure and throw up.

Fujitama: I really love tennis from the bottom of my heart
-But…I can’t do anything about the stress I feel.

041
L-kun: I understand, I will try my best to fulfill your dream

L-kun: So lets make good use of time,
-Start from the basics and teach me everything you know

L-kun: Stop hesitating over there! Relax!!
-Luck is on our side.
-Isn’t that so, Fusimaru

Fujitama: No, its Fujimaru

042
Fujitama: Now, keep your eyes on the ball, pull back your racket and move your position…
L-kun: Pull back the racket?
Fujitama: Yup, raise it high like so.
Small text right: back straight
Small text left: shoulders relaxed

Bullies: What the---Is this guy just starting now?
Small text: Is he an outsider
-Come think of it, I remember him carrying a Kendo bag

Bullies: Looks like the opponents for the No 1 and No 2 of Omorita Public High
-Are actually Puke Boy and Extreme Outsider!?
-How lucky are we?

Bullies: Let me make them piss in their pants…….

044
Fujitama: Such a close catch---
-He could actually block the ball from that position?

045
L-kun: As grandpa liked to say…
-An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth
-But…maybe I should hold back on my first day, huh?

L-kun: Heh, I don’t really care, either way…

Fujitama: Could you be thinking about…

L-kun: Using the technique you just taught me…

046
Senior: Hey hey…what a smooth and flexible serve…….

048
Senior: ….you can go higher you know…..

050
Fujitama: Ha, they froze!!

L-kun: They’ll be dead if that hit them…
-They can count themselves lucky

051
Fujitama: No, this is called a service point

Senior: Looks like we’ve got a talented batch this year

Senior: Hey, what are you doing!?
Fujitama: Oh yeah…What should I call you…?

052
-Yuzawa Ryou
-Remember my name. It shall bring you luck!

053
CHAPTER 2
TRANSFORMING THE EXTREME OUTSIDER!?


TN:
Thank you Trickless for your great suggestions!
An alternative title can be "Flying High" to replace "Look up Aim High"
Format: ( ) for separate frame, (-) for separate bubble

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Message  M le Dim 20 Avr - 1:10

ok il faut trad et clean le chap en 1er et puis j'editerais sa vous va ?
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Message  Keigo le Lun 21 Avr - 1:30

Faut un raw d'abord nan? >_<

Et est-ce que une team us a sorti le chap traduit ci-dessus? Et si oui, je pourrais avoir un lien please?
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Message  Reiji le Mar 22 Avr - 16:51

Désolé mec, mais je cherche toujours ...

Mais je viens d'apprendre que Bikernik et LeeSan de POT~FanClub~ ont deja traduit le tome 1 !!
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Message  Keigo le Jeu 24 Avr - 15:34

Ah ^^ On fait quoi alors? xD
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Message  Reiji le Jeu 24 Avr - 19:35

Je lui est demandé si il voulait bien le resortir mais il a refusé.

Je pense que si on ne trouve pas de trad en US de Seiryo , va falloir changé de manga ^^

Mais ne vous inquiétez pas, il y en a plein d'autres ( sur le tennis ) qui sont tradés
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